I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi everyone it is Brayden here we have a new thing today.
I have tought of new materials for the three Little pigs
here it is I hope you enjoy can I have some feedback and blog ya later
Hey Brayden, Its Bridget here I like your blog post on the 3 little pigs. Because, I like how you have listed all the things that you would use to biuld them a house. I also like how you have added a picture of what they might look like. Next time you could add all of the sides of the house. Yours sencerely, Bridget
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Hey Brayden, Its Bridget here I like your blog post on the 3 little pigs. Because, I like how you have listed all the things that you would use to biuld them a house. I also like how you have added a picture of what they might look like. Next time you could add all of the sides of the house.
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thanks for that feedback bridget yes i could have added the sides but I did not have the time
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kindregards baryden
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DeleteHey Brayden Thanks for your reply next time Maybe check your relpy for mistakes.
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