my long write

This is my long write.

On Tusday we all in rimu did a long write.

we did it based on a girl sitting on a bench outside

all alone.But then a butterfly came but she

tried to touch it but it flew away but she made

a blue paper butterfly anyway can I get some feedback

and some inprovment points.But another free write wiil

be coming on documentary book about deinoycuhs

blog ya later.

[August 23 of september]

So it was like any other normal day but it was peculiar and  out of the blue.

I was sitting on a bench outside the hospital and a beautiful butterfly flew around me

I tried to touch the butterfly but it flew away.

Then I thought of something so I made a blue paper butterfly but a gust of wind snacet it from my

Hands like someone had taken it and threw it in the air and it landed in the tree.

I was sad and alone but then I tried to grab a flower but someone wearing black

Came and took it I was surprised so we played together.

I finally touched the butterfly so we were both happy.

But then the person left I was completely sad and lonely.

But the nurse came and took me inside for diner and have a bath.

Then I get my pjs on brush my teeth and read a book.

Then it was time for bed mrs barbra tucked me in and read a book to

Me. then as I was about to close my eyes the blue paper butterfly flew

All around the hospital and everything that was blue glowed

Even my toy blue trex  then I ran to every room in the hospital and I was

Right everything was glowing blue so I went back to my room

And it was there on the windowsill so I picked it up

And it glowed blue but it then faded so I put it with all of my school

Work and then it started to glow again so I just watched it all night till

2:00 o'clock in the morning but I went to bed and fell asleep  the end

Friday lockdown

On Friday the 15 of March we went into lockdown I was petrified.
we had to go under the desks it hurt because it was cramped.
For me it hurt I could not go all the way up without hitting my
head on the desk but mrs Wilkes and mrs Taylor made us carb breaks
and our computers and a piece of paper our pencil cases and our silent reading
books. Then I got bored but then we could go watch despicable me 2
it was cool a minon got its head stuck in a jar of jam.
It took us 3 and a half hours to go home but we then went home
I was happy we went home and I knew we were safe
Questen: what did you do when the lockdown
happened? blog ya later

the world is black and white!

I woke up one morning and the world was black and white.
"I am really missing all of the colours of the world because it makes earth amazing  because the bushes and leaves are weird looking".
"how do I change it all back". "maybe going for a walk will take
my mind off it".
" hey look its a dog can I pat it you sure can".
"hey look a button".
"HEY STOP" "who are you"
"I am the evil no colour and I took earths colour from the world".
"I am going to stop you hey ya".
"yay the colour of the world is back".
the end

Breacking news, we love learning !

Rimu loves to learn and is very curious, even me .

On Wednesday we did some sciences and learned about the digestive system and the other two things 

on the board I did the skeleton muscular system and the eyes muscle helps to close your

eye.

The purple and pink is us learning about the human body.the green 

is us asking questions and so other people can answer the questions and 

explain it to us. I found out that in our nose's their are tiny smell cells 

and my question was how do people burp.

can I have some feedback and blog ya later 

documentary book about comsognathus

today at writing if we wrote our name on the board we had to wait  if the teachers
were busy we did a free write and I did compsognathus todays shout out is jacob
from my school he is my best friend the comsognathus is a dino who can niblle pepole
to the bone can I have some feedback and blog ya later

the new materiles

Hi everyone  it is Brayden here we have a new thing today.
I have tought of new materials for the three Little pigs
here it is I hope you enjoy can I have some feedback and blog ya later

animals

This my amimal the cadobit
a cross between a cat a dog and a rabiit.
I choose this because a cat can see in the dark.
a dog can listen to human commands and a rabit
can jump real far.

if he was my pet I would be happy
and I would love him for ever and feed him.
I would  snugle with him and be happy and never be sad.
he is probaly going to never exist and now I am loving him
right now.

thank you can i have some feedback blog ya later

bionic hand

On Wensday Mrs Taylors husband Richard  with his robotic hand.
it had bluetooth! and it could go all the way round
and could grab difrennt things but then his robotic hand came off
I was freacked out almost about to cry. But it was really cool to see how easy it is to use and that there are not lots of wires like the robotic hands on the movies.
then we could shake his hand and he can squise
our hands. anyway blog ya later