kia Ora bloggers Today I have something to share.
So we are learning about the great pacific garbage patch and how it is killing our marine life
Whales are dying around the world and it is because all of the plastic we throw away like in costa rica a turtle had a straw stuck up its nose.Birds end up with big amounts of plastic in their stomachs and on their throats.
We need to make sure our plastic goes in the yellow bins and the rings on our milk and water bottles are cut so birds can't choke on them.
So we had to do a slide about the great pacific garbage patch.
Also we had to do causes and effects like the cause of something and the effect of something
Positive thoughtful helpful
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Hi Brayden,
ReplyDeleteI liked the shortness and the straightforward text that you have written. I adore how you have given your opinion about the topic. About the marine life and birds in which receives the direct negative effects of pollution. Though there is an aspect I would change. The structure of some of your sentences as well as paragraphs are peculiar. Grammatic changes, using punctuation would simply fix this. Yet, this blog post is good and I've enjoyed it, keep it up.
Hello
ReplyDeleteCool blog post, maybe next time add more info and structure your blog differently next time.
Nice work brayden , understaderble
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