my amazing creative writing

kia Ora bloggers Today I am going to share my creative writing.

so we did creative writing and i did mine amazingly.

here is what i wrote here is the image too.

The boy was walking down the ally but he heard a dreadful sound.

A toe claw clicking on the hard cold concrete.

He smelt the awful smell of decay of death.

He turned around and saw it 1.6 feet at the hips.

Rows of sharp dagger like teeth with bits of its last meal it was a sight to behold. It walked as delicate as a bird.

He turned back around and fast walking but suddenly felt like something shoved him to the ground.He felt the animals teeth dig into his back.

He turned around as he was dying because the animal was still eating him but a sound startled it and before he died he saw a big blue stripe.

That was one more fatality for the same mysterious animal The general said.

Find out where it came from before more happens The colonel said.

The animal has come from the Lockwood estate just last night as another says dinosaurs as a raptor was there that fits the description.

Ingen international genetics incorporated the people who created that park back in 93.

They have to find them all.Then he heard a static on the radio general we have the rex it's at the zoo but big helicopters with a blue ingen logo on it are here already.

Stop them before we are too la-

We are too late, they have it and the rest of them.We are out of time.

Get a helicopter to get me and then we go and get them and get them someplace safe like that sanctuary island.

Yes sir.

Their base camp is in uh hold on.

It's in Colorado. No California.

They have big herbivores like Apatosaurus.

And the rex herself there all female.

But here missing the raptor her name is blue because of the stripe.

Let's find her then and say a trade but then take them all.

Bring the animal transport helicopter with the containers big red ones and green ones.

As the commander was walking he smelt the same odor of death and flesh.There she is he shot her with ten cc of tranquilizer 

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