I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
The wheel shoe is a awesome shoe. It was designed by me 100 children from costa rica were asked to do a 4 month trial for 4 mouths. The is a shoe designed for travel for to and from school
Price and Materials
The shoe is made out of crocodile skin and on the inside it is the fur from a mountain lion.The shoes will be sold in shops for $100000000000000000000000 billion dollars.At this price people will/will not want to buy them because it is priceless if it to 10c people would buy it but crocodile skin and mountain lion skin it is 100000000000000000000
It is a unique shoe because it goes 50- 60 mils per
This is important to the shoe because it helps if you are in a supermarket
If people's feet are sore and it is comfortable and useful.conclusion The wheel shoe can be summed up in one word, awesome
100% of the children who trialled the shoe say it is fabulous and would buy it and it is a cool shoe and it has been a lovely time to write this is amazing and i think it is amazing to buy and she you next time on the shopping channel .
this is my non chronological report can i have some feedback thank you
we have been learning about non fiction this year i have learnt about so much more about life
i found the writeing about things i have improved my writing