non chronological report

Introdution

The wheel shoe  is a awesome shoe. It was designed by me 100 children from costa rica  were asked to do a 4 month trial for 4 mouths. The is a shoe designed for travel for to and from school

Price and Materials

The shoe is made out of crocodile skin and on the inside it is the fur from a mountain lion.The shoes will be sold in shops for $100000000000000000000000 billion dollars.At this price people will/will not want to buy them because it is priceless if it to 10c people would buy it but crocodile skin  and mountain lion skin it is 100000000000000000000

billion.Style

It is a unique shoe because it goes 50- 60 mils per

This is important to the shoe because it helps if you are in a supermarket

If people's feet are sore and it is comfortable and useful.conclusion The wheel shoe  can be summed up in one word, awesome

100% of the children who trialled the shoe say it is fabulous and would buy it and it is a cool shoe and it has been a lovely time to write this is amazing and i think it is amazing to buy and she you next time on the shopping channel .

this is my non chronological report can i have some feedback thank you
we have been learning about non fiction this year i have learnt about so much more about life
i found the writeing about things i have improved my writing