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Monday, August 8, 2016

I am intelligent as a velociraptor
Quick as a cheetah
Slow as a sloth
Small as a compy
Large as a 35 t rex
Happy as a  boy
Sad as a puppy
Nice as a triceratops
Mean as a 35  t rex
... Tyrannosaurus Rex, ...Drawing of a running ...
Cold as a  lizard                        
Hot as a  sun
Weak as a  piece of plastic
Strong as a gorilla
Loud as a  lion
Quiet as an apple
Tough as a door
Gentle as a baby stegosaurus
Brave as a bear
Shy as a kid
Tame as a dilophosaurus
Wild as a tiger
Lazy as a  Mr M
Busy as a killer bee
Put it all together and you’ve got Brayden !

5 comments:

  1. Well done Brayden. You have presented a wonderful set of similes that represent you very well. Do you really think that Mr M is lazy? Please remember to always be positive. I love the way you have included so many dinosaur names.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  4. Hi there, my name is Jayden and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like how you used descriptive words in your poem. It made me think of a dinosaur. Have you thought about putting something in your poem that you can hear nearly every day?

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  5. HI Jayden here at Awahono School. I liked how you used interesting and descriptive words in your poem. If you changed something in this poem what would you change and why would you change it? Click on the link below to see my blog

    http://awahonojaydens.blogspot.co.nz/

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