I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Great imagery Brayden (that means you have created a picture in my head). Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Brayden. Great to see you blogging. i would not be too happy if 'hard rocks' fell from the sky.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to seeing more of your writing on your blog.
Hi Brayden, it's kirsty from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI like your 5sc it has good words.
i like your picha braden of you its nics and you can have a game with me.
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DeleteI like it do you want to play dinos
i like your picha braden of you its nics and you can have a game with me.
ReplyDeleteGreat imagination Brayden,
ReplyDeleteI hope to see another imaginational story.