I have done a good poem

hello bloggers Today I have written a poem.

So today we got to write our own poem about what we liked.

so I did a time machine one and it is awesome.I had done a lot on it.

So my success would be making a very good poem.

My challenges would be thinking  what I was going to say.

My poem was based on wings by pie Corbett.

Here is my poem: So what do yous think tell me in the comments

If i had a time machine   

I would lising to para calls and brachi calls from across

from camp and dryosaurs that graze on 

the green.

If I had a time machine

I would breathe under the water

To find the illusive mosassurus 

The scent of its 

skin. 

If I had a time machine

I would gaze at 

The outstanding 

Tyrannosaur 

Queen or king of all dinosaurs. 

If I had a time machine

I would dream of 

A world with dinosaurs the 

Jurassic world 

And prehistoric world 

Of the age.
So what do yous think tell me in the comments no shout out blog ya later.