yesterday we wroite a narative about a girl who whated to make it rain and she was stoped by enamis who whated the cloud and then a big plane came and she maded it rain but sh died and then she heled
the ships and then the girl in the lighthouse got her plan and she was going to make it herself can i get some feedback and here is what we used yesterday
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