We have been learning to write recounts. I have learned that recounts tell you what happened and you put the main ideas in paragraphs. I hope you enjoy my holiday recount.School Holidays On Sunday I went to the warehouse with Mum Nana Toby Zach and Me went on a shopping spree and I got some stretchy lizards and a stretchy snake.
And Mum Nana Toby Zach and Me got Mcdonalds and we raced Nana Toby and Zack and watched Beverly Hills Chihuahua and went home.
We got home had dinner and went to my nana’s house. and went home and went on youtube
On my computer and went to bed with my new lizard and snake.
What a very busy Sunday you had. Is Beverly Hills Chihuahua a fun film to watch? I presume your lizard and snake coexist ok.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
Brayden, I know that you always like to write and I have enjoyed watching your writing skills improve. Now that you are using capital letters and full stops, your writing is even better to read.
ReplyDeleteThink about telling the reader how you feel at the end of your recount.