I am intelligent as a velociraptor
Quick as a cheetah
Slow as a sloth
Small as a compy
Large as a 35 t rex
Happy as a boy
Sad as a puppy
Nice as a triceratops
Mean as a 35 t rex
Cold as a lizard
Hot as a sun
Weak as a piece of plastic
Strong as a gorilla
Loud as a lion
Quiet as an apple
Tough as a door
Gentle as a baby stegosaurus
Brave as a bear
Shy as a kid
Tame as a dilophosaurus
Wild as a tiger
Lazy as a Mr M
Busy as a killer bee
Put it all together and you’ve got Brayden !
Well done Brayden. You have presented a wonderful set of similes that represent you very well. Do you really think that Mr M is lazy? Please remember to always be positive. I love the way you have included so many dinosaur names.
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Jayden and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like how you used descriptive words in your poem. It made me think of a dinosaur. Have you thought about putting something in your poem that you can hear nearly every day?
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