I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
last term we had a ester fun day and we made hats and my one had a lot of stikers
and my one did not fit so i made my like liam's
my day nerly went a desaster and then it went back to bright and happy
that term was the best and i wish i code go back to that day and do it agen
Hello my name is Jaimie and I go to St Bernadette's school Hornby, I like the way your hat is really tall it almost looks like your a giraffe, But I think you could of made it stand out a bit more like adding colour to it no offense it looks a bit dull, like the photo though great work I am glad that day didn't become the worst day of the term for you :)
Hi Brayden, I am Gustan a Year 6 from St Bernadette's school. I like the cool hat that you made. It is a bit sad your hat did not fit you, but it still came out a cool hat. What sort of hat would you make next time?
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Hello my name is Jaimie and I go to St Bernadette's school Hornby, I like the way your hat is really tall it almost looks like your a giraffe, But I think you could of made it stand out a bit more like adding colour to it no offense it looks a bit dull, like the photo though great work I am glad that day didn't become the worst day of the term for you :)
ReplyDeletethank you that day was the best fun ever andi wish i
ReplyDeletewent thourh time and did it agen i wish from brayden at yaldhurst school
Hi Brayden, I am Gustan a Year 6 from St Bernadette's school.
ReplyDeleteI like the cool hat that you made. It is a bit sad your hat did not fit you, but it still came out a cool hat. What sort of hat would you make next time?